ChangeSet ID: 24445 CVSROOT: /opt/cvs-commit Module name: appdb Changes by: wineowner@winehq.org 2006/05/03 19:22:32
Modified files: . : appsubmit.php
Log message: "Alexander N. Sørnes" alex@thehandofagony.com Language improvements. Also make the use of language more consistent.
Patch: http://cvs.winehq.org/patch.py?id=24445
Old revision New revision Changes Path 1.38 1.39 +21 -22 appdb/appsubmit.php
Index: appdb/appsubmit.php diff -u -p appdb/appsubmit.php:1.38 appdb/appsubmit.php:1.39 --- appdb/appsubmit.php:1.38 4 May 2006 0:22:32 -0000 +++ appdb/appsubmit.php 4 May 2006 0:22:32 -0000 @@ -22,39 +22,38 @@ function newSubmition($errors) { // show add to queue form echo '<form name="newApp" action="appsubmit.php" method="post">'."\n"; - echo "<p>This page is for submitting new applications to be added to this\n"; - echo "database. The application will be reviewed by the AppDB Administrator\n"; - echo "and you will be notified via email if this application will be added to\n"; - echo "the database.</p>\n"; - echo "<p><h2>Before continuing please check that you have:</h2>\n"; + echo "<p>This page is for submitting new applications to be added to the\n"; + echo "database. The application will be reviewed by an AppDB Administrator,\n"; + echo "and you will be notified via e-mail if it is added to the database or rejected.</p>\n"; + echo "<p><h2>Before continuing, please ensure that you have</h2>\n"; echo "<ul>\n"; if ($_REQUEST['apptype'] == 1) { - echo " <li>Searched for this application in the database. Duplicate submissions will be rejected.</li>\n"; + echo " <li>Searched for this application in the database. Duplicate submissions will be rejected</li>\n"; echo " <li>Really want to submit an application instead of a new version of an application\n"; - echo " that is already in the database. If this is the case browse to the application\n"; - echo " and click on 'Submit new version'</li>\n"; + echo " that is already in the database. If this is the case, browse to the application\n"; + echo " and click on ‘Submit new version’</li>\n"; } echo " <li>Entered a valid version for this application. This is the application\n"; - echo " version, NOT the wine version(which goes in the testing results section of the template)</li>\n"; + echo " version, NOT the Wine version (which goes in the testing results section of the template)</li>\n"; echo " <li>Tested this application under Wine. There are tens of thousands of applications\n"; - echo " for windows, we don't need placeholder entries in the database. Please enter as complete \n"; + echo " for Windows, we do not need placeholder entries in the database. Please enter as complete \n"; echo " as possible testing results in the version template provided below</li>\n"; echo "</ul></p>"; - echo "<p>Please don't forget to mention which Wine version you used, how well it worked\n"; - echo "and if any workaround were needed. Having app descriptions just sponsoring the app\n"; - echo "(Yes, some vendors want to use the appdb for this) or saying "I haven't tried this app with Wine" "; - echo "won't help Wine development or Wine users.</p>\n"; + echo "<p>Please do not forget to mention which Wine version you used, how well it worked\n"; + echo "and if any workarounds were needed. Having app descriptions just sponsoring the app\n"; + echo "(yes, some vendors want to use the appdb for this) or saying ‘I haven’t tried this app with Wine’ "; + echo "will not help Wine development or Wine users.</p>\n"; echo "<b><span style="color:red">Please only submit applications/versions that you have tested.\n"; echo "Submissions without testing information or not using the provided template will be rejected.\n"; - echo "If you can't see the in-browser editors below please try Firefox, Mozilla or Opera browsers.\n</span></b>"; - echo "<p>After your application has been added you'll be able to submit screenshots for it, post"; + echo "If you are unable to see the in-browser editors below, please try Firefox, Mozilla or Opera browsers.\n</span></b>"; + echo "<p>After your application has been added, you will be able to submit screenshots for it, post"; echo " messages in its forums or become a maintainer to help others trying to run the application.</p>"; } //deny access if not logged on if(!$_SESSION['current']->isLoggedIn()) { - errorpage("Insufficient privilages to create application. Are you sure you are logged in"); + errorpage("Insufficient privilages to create application. Are you sure you are logged in?"); exit; }
@@ -258,7 +257,7 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub']) echo "<p>This is the full view of the rejected application. \n"; echo "You need to pick a category before submitting \n"; echo "it into the database.\n"; - echo "<p>Click delete to remove the selected item from the queue. An email will automatically be sent to the\n"; + echo "<p>Click delete to remove the selected item from the queue. An e-mail will automatically be sent to the\n"; echo "submitter to let them know the item was deleted.</p>\n\n"; echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n"; } else @@ -313,7 +312,7 @@ if ($_REQUEST['sub']) echo "<p>This is the full view of the application version that has been Rejected. \n";
echo "<b>App Version</b> This type of application will be nested under the selected application parent.\n"; - echo "<p>Click delete to remove the selected item from the queue an email will automatically be sent to the\n"; + echo "<p>Click delete to remove the selected item from the queue. An e-mail will automatically be sent to the\n"; echo "submitter to let him know the item was deleted.</p>\n\n"; echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n"; } else @@ -403,7 +402,7 @@ else // if ($_REQUEST['sub']) is not def { //help echo "<div align=center><table width='90%' border=0 cellpadding=3 cellspacing=0><tr><td>\n\n"; - echo "<p>This is the list of applications waiting for re-submition, or to be deleted.</p>\n"; + echo "<p>This is the list of applications waiting for re-submission, or to be deleted.</p>\n"; echo "<p>To view a submission, click on its name. From that page you can delete or edit and\n"; echo "re-submit it into the AppDB .<br>\n"; echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n"; @@ -426,10 +425,10 @@ else // if ($_REQUEST['sub']) is not def { //help echo "<div align=center><table width='90%' border=0 cellpadding=3 cellspacing=0><tr><td>\n\n"; - echo "<p>This is the list of versions waiting for re-submition or deletion.</p>\n"; + echo "<p>This is the list of versions waiting for re-submission or deletion.</p>\n"; echo "<p>To view a submission, click on its name. From that page you can delete or edit and re-submit it into \n"; echo "the AppDB .<br>\n"; - echo "<p>Note that versions linked to application that have not been yet approved are not displayed in this list.</p>\n"; + echo "<p>Note that versions linked to application that have not been approved yet are not displayed in this list.</p>\n"; echo "the AppDB.<br>\n"; echo "</td></tr></table></div>\n\n";